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Hear You

Your voice bre
aks into the
Sanctity of my mind
Sha
      tter
            ed
Brok
        en
I can still hear you
Everything you do
Bre
aks me
Hidden away
The thoughts pursue
Persistant
Brea
        king
Sha
      tter
            ing
And I can still hear you
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Even my music cannot drown it out anymore

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:iconlyfin:
I like how you expressed break and shatter!

It feels like I'm
f
a
l
l
i
n
g
down >in<to my own subconscious!

F
l
e
e
t
i
n
g
until my heart
f
a
l
l
s
- a p a r t -.

Making we w r why I'm still ~here~. But it is oVeRfLoWiNg >in<to my very {heart}.
o e
n d

And I can't make it s-t-o-p. I just can't make it...

S-T-O-P

--
Jack: GET ME OUT OF THIS PIGHOLE!!!
Jill: They're cows, Jack.
Jack: Oh... GET ME OUT OF THIS COWHOLE!!!
...
Jack: ... Delicious.
Jill: Ew!

^

Well: See what I have to deal with? This is exactly why I shook the hill last time!
:iconlyfin:
revision:

- a p a r t -.

Making me
-w - - r-
- o - e -
- -n d -
why I'm

--
Jack: GET ME OUT OF THIS PIGHOLE!!!
Jill: They're cows, Jack.
Jack: Oh... GET ME OUT OF THIS COWHOLE!!!
...
Jack: ... Delicious.
Jill: Ew!

^

Well: See what I have to deal with? This is exactly why I shook the hill last time!
:iconwindfrost:
I love the fragmentation of this piece. Great work!

--
"Burn when you sink into my bed of ice."

- Ma Memoire Sale, Les Chansons d'Amour
:iconauzziegirl497:
Thank you, glad you liked it ^^

--
'Goodbye' is the hardest word you'll ever have to say...

I'm just dreaming of my Fairytale Ending.


"Tobias: Do you often get misunderstood?
Ziva: Once in a blue lagoon.
Tobias: I think I'll translate."
:iconauzziegirl497:
Lol getting a bit over-excited there? XD

I'm glad you liked it :P

--
'Goodbye' is the hardest word you'll ever have to say...

I'm just dreaming of my Fairytale Ending.


"Tobias: Do you often get misunderstood?
Ziva: Once in a blue lagoon.
Tobias: I think I'll translate."
:iconlyfin:
I just wanted to EXPRESS myself!

...

That sounded SO wrong in SO many ways...

--
Jack: GET ME OUT OF THIS PIGHOLE!!!
Jill: They're cows, Jack.
Jack: Oh... GET ME OUT OF THIS COWHOLE!!!
...
Jack: ... Delicious.
Jill: Ew!

^

Well: See what I have to deal with? This is exactly why I shook the hill last time!
:iconauzziegirl497:
Lol sooo wrong XD But I understood what you meant :P

--
'Goodbye' is the hardest word you'll ever have to say...

I'm just dreaming of my Fairytale Ending.


"Tobias: Do you often get misunderstood?
Ziva: Once in a blue lagoon.
Tobias: I think I'll translate."
:iconthedownpour:
Very good and very cleverly done

--
If I'm to fall
Would you be there to applaud?
Or would you hide behind them all?
'Cause if I were to go
In my heart you'll grow
And that's where you belong.

Oasis
:iconirondrake:
this is awesome. i like the way the words are broken up. :aww: its really cool

--
~Stories wait for endings but Songs are brave things, brave enough to sing when all they know is darkness~
"There's no poetry between us." Said the paper to the pen.
~Sometimes it's Hell getting to Heaven~

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